The Imaginary Realms of
Gilbert M. Stack




Deep Storm by Lincoln Child

I have always been fascinated by the idea of humans exploring the great depths of the oceans, so I am a sucker for a book or movie that takes place in a habitat deep beneath the sea. Deep Storm fits that bill perfectly—twelve thousand feet below the Atlantic. Add to that a mystery involving a secret government project and an inexplicable set of illnesses afflicting the people working on the station and you have the makings for a very good story. Unfortunately, while Child’s tale is enjoyable, it doesn’t hit a home run.

On the positive side, the mystery is fascinating and complicated by intrigues caused by geopolitics and mental illness. The tension is palpable and the pacing is great. It was easy to like and hate the appropriate characters and, most importantly, the ending worked. The ultimate threat lived up to all the hype we were exposed to getting there.

On the negative side, there was very little about the undersea research facility that impacted the story other than to isolate the cast from the rest of the world. The atmosphere in the deep-sea station was the same as on the surface and other than a couple of mandatory—the ocean is going to flood us and kill everyone—moments, the location had nothing to contribute to the story.

To make matters worse, the paranoid military guys fell on the wrong side of the argument about the aliens. Why would every person in Washington and all military personnel on the station be convinced that aliens had left a packet of helpful gifts for the unsophisticated peoples of earth? Not one of these paranoid individuals was willing to consider the idea that the aliens might not have our best interests at heart. At first, I thought this obviously ridiculous position was caused by the aliens, but as things turned out, that clearly wasn’t the case. And really—this needlessly strained credibility. The U.S. would still have gone after the alien tech even if it feared the interstellar visitors’ malevolent intentions.

Finally, I figured out what was causing the mental illness about half a book sooner than the hero did. Seeing as he is supposed to be a genius and I lack a medical degree, I would have liked to have seen him pick up my idea and run with it a lot sooner than he did.

Weighing the good and the bad, I’m still glad I read the book. It’s a fun novel, just not one that I ever expect to want to reread.

The Siamese Twin Mystery by Ellery Queen

I’ve only read a handful of Ellery Queen mysteries in my life, but each tends to play out the same way. There’s a murder with a bunch of suspects and Ellery Queen through careful observation, repeated questioning of the witnesses, and some fancy deductive thinking figures out who the killer is. In several of the books, the reader gets challenged to name the murderer too—because that is the true gimmick in an Ellery Queen mystery. The clues are all there if you can get past the smoke and mirrors to solve the crime.

For the record, I never identify the killer, but I always enjoy trying. In The Siamese Twin Mystery, I came very close to getting the answer, but I’m not sure the authors were actually fair with us this time. In a genre where the exotic clue is often the key to everything, I’m not convinced that they played fair with the exotic element.

And yet, this is my favorite Ellery Queen mystery to date, because there was a second plot having nothing directly to do with the mystery that added a lot of tension to the story. The Queens are caught in an isolated mansion cut off from the world by an encroaching forest fire. Throughout the tale the fire gets closer and adds a disturbingly personal threat to the investigation. It frays nerves and physically endangers everyone present adding a touch of the adventure story to the murder mystery. It was a decidedly nice change of pace from the other Ellery Queen Mysteries I’ve read.

Random Act by Gerry Boyle

This novel is two mysteries in one. The first has to do with the intentions of Marta, the new girlfriend of the hero’s close friend, Louis. The second has to do with his attempt to make sense of a horrific random act of violence. The two stories are linked only through the fact that Jack McMorrow is investigating them at the same time.

Jack is a newspaper reporter with what I gathered to be a violent past. He’s comfortable with guns and he and his friends are quite capable of taking care of themselves. While going to visit his friend Louis, he is accosted with a gun by Louis’ new girlfriend, Marta. She has a difficult past. Her very wealthy and abusive boyfriend has just been tortured, killed, and robbed by Russian mobsters and there is a great deal of concern that they will come after her next. She is a very cold and disturbing individual. She clearly came to Louis for protection and she has no concern at all that her presence might endanger Jack’s family. She expects Jack to protect her because he’s Louis’ friend. The longer the novel proceeds, the more disturbing Marta gets, especially when Jack starts poking holes in her story.

The random act of violence of the title is the better mystery, especially as Jack become the target of hostile acts as he investigates the story. A homeless and clearly unstable man murders a woman with a hatchet as she enters a store. Jack almost sees it happen and he can’t stop trying to make some sense of this seemingly arbitrary murder. I figured out what had actually happened very early in the tale and was disappointed that it took until the end of the book for Jack to even consider my theory, but that didn’t mean the mystery wasn’t a good one or that the tension didn’t rise considerably as Jack gets closer and closer to the truth.

Boyle thought through his mystery very well. His characters are well drawn and I liked Jack very much. It helped considerably that narrator, Michael A. Smith, did such a great job bringing the novel to life.

Run Away by Harlan Coben

I’ve been wanting to read a book by Harlan Coben for some time now, but Run Away may not have been the one to start with. The premise is excellent—how far would a father go to save his drug addicted daughter? But unfortunately the actual story just didn’t work for me. The more I read the more impatient I got to finish the novel. It’s a very bad sign when finishing the book is more important than learning how the plot develops.

By the conclusion of the book, there were way too many coincidences for me to believe in the story. As just one example an obscure religious cult has three unique connections—none of which depends on the other—to the principle family in the story—none of which the hero knows about at the beginning of the story. And that’s not the worst of it. It breaks the suspension of disbelief.

The First Lady by James Patterson and Brendan DuBois

You know the president is up to no good when he’s described as being in bed with the love of his life. Shortly thereafter, the president and his mistress are ambushed by the press. When the president’s wife learns what happened, she departs the White House and manages to lose her secret service detail. With an election weeks away, the president and his staff have to find the First Lady before the press realizes she’s gone. That means they need to keep her disappearance completely quiet which means this can’t be handled like a typical missing persons case. They blackmail the head of the secret service to handle the investigation herself and then things get complicated.

This is a fast moving, really fun, thriller with just about no one playing it straight. If you’re cynical about politics you’ll love all the politicians in this novel—they’re always willing to surprise you with a new low. I’m not sure that I found all the parts of this novel believable, I’m certainly glad I read it.

Thin Air by Lisa Gray

I should start with a confession. I bought this book purely because of its title. Thin Air—as in, “disappeared into thin air,”—has always struck me as a near perfect title for a missing person mystery. So when I finally started to read it, I wasn’t actually expecting a lot from the title and for the first few chapters I flew through the pages very rapidly. By then the story had caught me and I slowed down and started reading much more carefully.

The missing person in question is the detective from whose point of view the novel is narrated. Much to her surprise, she learns that she went missing as a three-year-old and that everything she thinks she knows about her life is a lie. This novel is her attempt to find out who her mother really was and if the man she grew up knowing as her father had murdered that woman. Not your typical missing persons mystery…

I thoroughly enjoyed this novel and only have one significant complaint—a totally unexpected kiss outside a sleezy strip club which we the reader were supposed to think led to genuine romantic tension. I didn’t buy it, but I’m a guy. I suppose it’s possible women dream about guys coming on to them with an aggressive kiss right after they leave off questioning a source at a strip club, although I’m fairly certain I never met any of them.

I’ll close on a positive note. I didn’t figure out the murderer. The clues were there, I just missed them. Yet the culprit was completely believable and there’s a nice surprise ending in the epilogue.

Dire Wolf of the Quapaw by Phil Truman

Deputy Marshal Jubal Smoak is hard on the trail of Quapaw bandit, Crow Redhand. Redhand has shot Smoak twice so the deputy is highly motivated to bring him to justice. Then Redhand becomes the prime suspect in a massacre of a Quapaw family and the stakes raise considerably. Smoak needs to get his man before more people are senselessly butchered. The problem is that—dangerous as Redhand is—he’s not the only suspect in the murder. A drifter had a fight with two of the now-dead family members and more troubling yet—for the superstitiously minded—there’s a Quapaw legend about an evil spirit that takes the form of a giant dire wolf and the locals clearly fear this monster is behind the crime. Smoak isn’t big on superstition, but the reader will certainly find themselves seriously considering this possibility…

As if that isn’t enough of a mystery/adventure, there are very intriguing side mysteries that keep wrapping around the main problem. One of these was so cleverly inserted that I missed its possible connection to the main story until Smoak started putting the pieces together. Once he did, I started to figure out the whole plot—and isn’t that a significant part of what the reader wants in a good mystery? A fair chance to figure out what’s going on and then the excitement of seeing the hero try to bring the villain to justice.

This is a good mystery, but it’s also a good western. If you like both, you’ll want to read this novel.

The Headmaster’s Cave by D.S. Allen

At its core, The Headmaster’s Cave is less a mystery and more of an adventure story about two children and their dog trying to get a friend out of trouble at the infamous Headmaster’s Cave. On this level, it’s an enjoyable tale. The friends have a series of adventures on their way to the cave and eventually find their friend and have even more adventures before they are able to get home again. Unfortunately, the mystery elements are not as strong as the adventure elements.

The Headmaster’s Cave is an infamous location because one hundred years ago the headmaster of a local school and seven students disappeared there. For ten decades the entire town has condemned the headmaster as a sick murderer on the basis that he and the students disappeared. The cave is now blocked off because other people going to the cave have been trapped by the rising tide and drowned, but apparently the idea that the headmaster and the students might also have been trapped and washed out to sea has never occurred to anyone. He must be a brutal murderer because…well there isn’t actually any reason to think this.

Now if only the schoolmates of our hero George (descended from the allegedly murderous headmaster) had believed this legend it wouldn’t in any way detract from the story. Kids can be cruel and they don’t always think things through. But all the adults also believe the accusation and despite the one hundred years that have passed, their anger is sufficient to still cause trouble for George’s family. Had it been thirty years ago, or even fifty years ago, I might have understood this, but one hundred years feels like ancient history.

The children are lured to the Headmaster’s Cave (which requires them to hike all day and camp out at night to reach) under the promise that they will learn the truth of what really happened there a century ago. I found it believable the kids would have tried to go, but wish that the story was not set in the modern day with cell phones so it would be a little more believable that their parents would buy their stories about staying at each others’ houses. In any event, reaching the proximity of the cave is when the story transforms from being an okay adventure to an exciting action-packed drama. The villain is wonderfully crazy and the kids have to be both very brave and very smart. In addition, elements dropped earlier in the story come back into play here in a most rewarding fashion. And of course, the mystery is resolved and it’s both moving and satisfying.

I think this series has a lot of potential. It’s difficult to write convincing stories about children and Allen has compiled an endearing cast here. I’d like to see more.

I received this book free from Audiobook Boom in exchange for an honest review.

Wedding Woes by J.J. Chow

This delightful story charts the efforts of Winston Wong to marry the woman of his dreams while navigating a host of wedding-related crises and trying to discover whether or not a murderer is among his guests. Chow skillfully builds a sympathetic connection between Winston and the reader right in the first chapter of the story when Winston has his reception hall ripped away from him due to an unfortunate double booking. Things quickly go downhill from there. As he scrambles to make other arrangements, his best man loses the rings, decorations are destroyed, and well…lots of challenges confront him. The most significant of these challenges are the large Chan family who stumble upon the rehearsal shortly before their patriarch dies in a bizarre accident. Winston’s kind-hearted fiancé invites the bereaved family (and another suitor) to the rehearsal dinner where events suggest that perhaps the death of Mr. Chan was not as accidental as it first appeared.

The mystery is well-developed, but I must admit it was the personal interactions between Winston and the delightful cast that I most enjoyed in this tale. This book is filled with quirky but thoroughly likable individuals. And the ending has me wondering what new troubles await Winston and his bride.

The Thin Man by Dashiell Hammett

There is something about this mystery that is just fun. Forget for a moment that this novel transformed the mystery genre by mixing the hardboiled detective with romance and a little comedy. And forget that it is one of the all-time greats of detective fiction. Nick and Nora are two of the most enjoyable protagonists in any detective novel. He’s a retired private investigator who has seen a little bit of everything and was very happy to leave it behind. She’s his young, very wealthy, wife who wants excitement in her life and finds Nick’s past as a detective to be glamorous and enthralling. When a mystery starts to develop near them, Nick tries his best to stay out of its way while Nora tries to drag the two of them directly into the center of the mess.

The supporting cast centers on an eccentric inventor, his murdered secretary, his ex-wife, their two children and her new husband. All of these people are brilliantly brought to life in totally believable detail. But most of all they are fun to encounter as they swirl around Nick and Nora, each trying to use them to get something they want from the eccentric inventor—the Thin Man of the title. Throw in the police, mobsters, a lawyer and a cast of hard drinking socialites and you have all the ingredients to give Nora all the excitement she could want while keeping Nick from escaping his old profession.

The Big Sleep by Raymond Chandler

I find it strange that the first word I think of to describe this hardboiled detective novel is “beautiful”. The heroes of these sorts of novels are rough and ready and I expect the prose to be the same. Yet that isn’t the case in The Big Sleep. From the very first page, Chandler’s writing is elegant, smooth and even breath-taking. His novel is so superbly crafted that when the movie starring Bogart and Bacall was made in 1946 they lifted much of the movie dialogue directly from the pages of Chandler’s book. It’s that good.

His characters are also superb from Marlowe himself with his tough exterior and uncompromising sense of honor, to General Sternwood who becomes sympathetic only because he’s dying, to his two daughters who are both a mess but in such fascinatingly distinctive ways, to Joe Brodie who wants to be tough but proves he isn’t whenever he’s pushed. I could go on, but I’ll settle for adding one more—Harry Jones, a man who is physically small and slight of build but proves to have more backbone and loyalty than anyone else in the novel but Marlowe himself.

I also loved the movie. I saw it several times with my roommates in college, but there were several small problems with it that do not exist in the novel. The biggest of those problems is that at the end of the movie we never really understood how Eddie Mars got the goods on the Sternwood family or how Marlowe figured out who murdered Regan. I think that might have been due to the movie standards of the time because the pivotal scene in the novel only halfway happens in the movie. Marlowe comes home in the book to find Carmen Sternwood naked in his bed (she kept her clothes on in the movie) and when he throws her out she loses all of her cuteness and much of her appearance of humanity and begins hissing at him. (Again, in the movie she just gets thrown out.) Chandler builds this scene with extraordinary care. It shows us there is a lot more going on in Carmen’s head than the doped up sweet and giggly mess that she shows the world most of the time. Without this scene the ending of the book makes no sense whatsoever—which may in part explain why the movie created its own ending rather than stick with Chandler’s better (but less romantic) one.

If you’re ever wondering why Raymond Chandler is held in such high esteem as an author of detective novels, The Big Sleep is a great place to start.